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• A funny dream

  2008-2-29

    I had a funny dream last night.Here it is.
    My sister and I went to Daniel's school.We had a class in his classroom.My book was very different from others.I did't know how the class was going,I was going to sleep.Out of the blue,the teacher knocked my desk:"You!What's the idea of the dialogue?"I stood up quickly but didn't know what to say.At this time,Daniel who was a funny and nifty boy,smiled to me and blinked his eyes,and cried out:"Oh,who is she?I have never seen her in our class before."Then others all followed.The class was upseted.
    After the class,we wanted to take a walk around the school.A wolf appeared in front of us when we were in the front of the girls' dorm building.It was pretty awful because of his big and long mouth.He speaked out:"Hey,how are you?Can we be friends?"OMG!What's the bugbear?We ran away at once,but he ran after.We need Daniel's help,but the school changed,had no way to find him and we couldn't cry out for help...ringing,ringing...Oh,it was the alarm clock.I couldn't finish the fearful but enjoyable dream even though I would like to continue.Pity!

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• Want to be wandering...

  2008-2-12

  Vacation has been over.It is really dullness living,only have slept really well.
  We haven't gone home for the Spring Festival.I passed through a several day at my classmate's,learned a little guitar.We celebrated the festival together at the boss' house and watched the program.
  The following days,we slept to midday then ate sth then watched TV.Repeated the same until today.
  I have thought much these evenings,but they are all escapism without useful.I don't know how to do my job better,it also always has sth boring.
  I always want to learn sth,but I have no power.I always have no power.I don't know how to give myself power...
  I want to be wandering for a while!很想流浪一回...

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• Reworked by Daniel of my article

  2008-1-21

  Spring Festival is around the corner and our vacation will come,cheer up!

  Around the corner表示就要来到了，不过我想你的vacation 应该在festival 前吧，所以后边的will come不当。可以说，spring festival is coming, and our vacation is around the corner.
    The problem is I am in SZ far away from home.It is snowing very very strongly in my hometown(I appreciate that[I appreciate that表示我对这很感激或者很欣赏，可以改为I love snow] but can't see this year).It is heard from my sister who cried in my phone call.

  以上几个名字太零散了，可以变成一句：my sister wept on the phone and told me that it was snowing strongly in my hometown. I love snow, but I can’t see it, since I am far from home in SZ.

   

  She wants me to go back home strongly like the snow does. But the ticket is too hard to buy and the traffic is too busy to crash and it’s too hard to buy a ticket.(因果的前后顺序)

   

  I am the only one person who wants to go back home among my colleagues and friends, so I am afraid I can't go through the long fearful way.

   

  In our office,the pak was back his home Pakistan yesterday.Only his staffs (staff 是个表示整体的名词，没有复数，它本身就是指全体员工，staff) are here.
    For (改为by, by now,到现在为止) now,I haven't got my ticket. Thinking about all I may meet on the train I don't want to go home for the Spring Festival although I am also missing my family and my never-seen niece(my sister said she is very lovely and alike （alike 改为like，alike 后面不接东西，比如，they look alike.） her mother).I am thinking about I can be back home on labor day the next year. And the boss also suggested me like that,he said it is not a right time to go home at this moment. 

   

  as the boss suggested it’s not a right time to go home at this moment,so why not labor day next year? That’s a neat idea. (你的句子也未尝不可，这写这些仅作参考)

   

   

   Yesterday afternoon,on my way to dormitory after duty, when a little girl called me:"hello,little aunt!"I was very surprised.

   

  I was very surprised when a girl called me “little aunt” yesterday afternoon, on my way to dorm after duty.

   

   

  Am I that old?God,maybe I was wearing mature that day.I am always treat （treating）myself as a girl not a woman. Because I have a baby face,people all treat me like that.But in fact,I am not still a child now.I am working not a school girl.

  (这个句子前后不平衡，可以改为，I am an office lady, not a school girl. 或者 I am working in a company, not studying in school.)

  I should know that have (having) a baby face doesn't mean I am still a child.
    Today is Sunday with nothing to do. (这个句子主语是today, today with nothing to do 是不对的，应该是你with nothing to do)

  so I came here the office to goof time.

  可以变成一个句子，On Sunday, with nothing to do, I came to the office to kill my time.

  On the English Blog Website,I only read Daniel and Monica's articles.So many members 改为people there,but (but, and , if, 这些是连接两个完整的句子的，叫做连词，你看你前面的“so many people there”，这不是一个句子，应该改成一个句子“there are so many people, 然后再加but) I don't want to go anywhere except the two. but I just feel like visiting two blogs there.

   

  From there,I know Monica is a Kiwi and it seems she knows much about everything.(她好像什么都知道，she seems to know everything)

  Learn sth from her articles not only English is good for me.(这个句子很大问题，what I can learn from her article is not only English itself, but sth else.)

   

  Daniel is a good friend of me.He is a junior in South China Agriculture University.I am so lucky to know him from (in) an English group.He is not only good at his classes (subjects) but also has many hobbies.

   

  I like his articles and voice.You can find many his songs on tudou.com website sung by him. Here I want to thank him gave for giving me so many beautiful songs and articles.
    It's very disorderly and I am talking about something meaningless.

    It seems that I am talking about nonsense./ I seem to be talking all bullshit./ okay, cut the long shit.

   

   

  The reason is,to be honest,I can't write even in Chinese.

  (you can write, “I am not good at writing, not even in Chinese.”)

   

  When I was a student,the most nerve-racking is making compositions.I was not a good student, so I always didn't hand in it or asked others to do it for me.

  So I had to give no shit to the composition, or just ask others to do it for me

   

  I am very confused about how to compose so many words and sentences and why others can do but either me   I can’t.
    So literature is too hard to me,I have no literary talent. Therefore,for now I can't write out anything else. Here are just sth meaningless in English.

   

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• Something meaningless...

  2008-1-20

  　　Spring Festival is around the corner and our vacation will come,cheer up!

  　　The problem is I am in SZ away from home.It is very very strong snowing in my hometown(I appreciate that but can't see this year).It is heard from my sister who cried in my phone call.She wants me back home strongly like the snowing.But the ticket is too hard to buy and the traffic is too busy to crash.I am the only one person want to back home among my colleagues and friends,so I am afraid I can't go through the long fearful way.In our office,the pak was back his home Pakistan yesterday.Only his staffs are here.

  　　For now,I haven't got my ticket.Thinking about all I may meet on the train I don't want to go home for the Spring Festival although I am also missing my family and my never seen niece(my sister said she is very lovely and alike her mother).I am thinking about I can be back home on labor day the next year.And the boss also suggested me like that,he said it is not a right time to go home at this moment.

  　　Yesterday afternoon,on my way to dormitory after duty,when a little girl called me:"hello,little aunt!"I was very surprised.Am I that old?God,maybe I was wearing mature that day.I am always treat myself as a girl not woman.Because I have a baby face,people all treat me like that.But in fact,I am not still a child now.I am working not a school girl.I should know that have a baby face doesn't mean I am still a child.

  　　Today is Sunday with nothing to do.so I came here the office to goof time.On the English Blog Website,I only read Daniel and Monica's articles.So many members there,but I don't want to go anywhere except the two.From there,I know Monica is a Kiwi and it seems she knows much about everything.Learn sth from her articles not only English is good for me.Daniel is a good friend of me.He is a junior at South Agriculture University.I am so lucky to know him from an English group.He is not only good at his classes but also has many hobbies.I like his articles and voice.You can find many songs on tudou.com website sung by him.Here I want to thank him gave me so many beautiful songs and articles.

  　　It's very disorderly and I am talking about something meaningless.The reason is,to be honest,I can't write even in Chinese.When I am a student,the most nerve-racking is making compositions.I am not a good student,so I always didn't hand in it or asked others to do it for me.I am very confused how to compose so many words and sentences and why others can do but either me???

  　　So literature is too hard to me,I have no literary talentl.Therefore,for now I can't write out anything else.Here are just sth meaningless in English.

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• 一生有你　with you forever

  2008-1-16

  因为梦见你离开                    Because of dreaming about your leaving
  我从哭泣中醒来                    I wake up with weeping
  看夜风吹过窗台                    looking at the wind blow through the windowsill at night
  你能否感受我的爱                 Could you feel my love
  等到老去那一天                    when we are aged one day
  你是否还在我身边                 will you still with me
  看那些誓言谎言                    looking back those paroles and lies
  随往事慢慢飘散                    fly disperse step by step with bygones
  多少人曾爱慕你年轻时的容颜    so many people ever adored your youthful looks
  可知谁愿承受岁月无情的变迁    but do you know who could receive the ruthless changes
  多少人曾在你生命中来了又还    so many people ever came and went through your life
  可知一生有你我都陪在你身边    but do you know I am always with you forever
  因为梦见你离开                    Because of dreaming about your leaving
  我从哭泣中醒来                    I wake up with weeping
  看夜风吹过窗台                    looking at the wind blow through the windowsill at night
  你能否感受我的爱                 Could you feel my love
  等到老去那一天                    when we are aged one day
  你是否还在我身边                  will you still with me
  看那些誓言谎言                    looking back those paroles and lies
  随往事慢慢飘散                    fly disperse step by step with bygones
  多少人曾爱慕你年轻时的容颜    so many people ever adored your youthful looks
  可知谁愿承受岁月无情的变迁    but do you know who could receive the ruthless changes
  多少人曾在你生命中来了又还    so many people ever came and went through your life
  可知一生有你我都陪在你身边    but do you know I am always with you forever
  当所有一切都已看平淡            when I treat all fade
  是否有一种坚持还留在心间      whether there is a insistenting even stay in my heart
  多少人曾爱慕你年轻时的容颜    so many people ever adored your youthful looks
  可知谁愿承受岁月无情的变迁    but do you know who could receive the ruthless changes
  多少人曾在你生命中来了又还    so many people ever came and went through your life
  可知一生有你我都陪在你身边    but do you know I am always with you forever
  多少人曾爱慕你年轻时的容颜    so many people ever adored your youthful looks
  可知谁愿承受岁月无情的变迁    but do you know who could receive the ruthless changes
  多少人曾在你生命中来了又还    so many people ever came and went through your life
  可知一生有你我都陪在你身边    but do you know I am always with you forever
  可知一生有你我都陪在你身边    but do you know I am always with you forever

  It's NaN's song,I like it.because of my english level I know the translation is very bad.I am just trying to do some translations.I hope you friends could help me to correct errors and unsuitablities here.Great thanks!

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• The first day

  2008-1-12

    Today,I am very happy to have my own English Blog.I got to know it from a friend named Daniel Tsang who has just closed his qzone.This morning,he shared a story with me,and because of my working I read little.But I began to know that's his own article,so I searched his qq info.Oh,that's right.I am clever ,I found his home page is his English Blog.So I went there to see what he has done on earth.Wow!So many articles there,I am very delighted to know the English Blog.I haven't written any article in English before.It's not my fault but it's still my fault.Because of my poor English I can't write,but why is it poor?Anyway,I will keep my English diary like Daniel from now on although with poor English.

    There was an idea coming to my mind when I woke up this morning.I want to use crystal soil to grow two plants,one for myself,the other for my future boy So I will go to buy two plants tomorrow,that's right Sunday.But the thing is what kind of plant should I take?OK, now stop here,I must do my work and have a pondering about my plant.

    I can't write much at the first time,but I believe I can write out more step by step.

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