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     There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主题句)For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. (2) (扩展句)    The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主题句)
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